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2009年专八英语作文真题:方言在公众场合使用

发布时间:2013-05-18 17:21浏览次数:10534
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题目 Are Dialects Just as Acceptable in Public Places?
说明 Are Dialects Just as Acceptable in Public Places?
要求
1.in the first part of your writing you should present your thesis statement
2.in the second part you should support the thesis statement with appropriate details
3.in the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.
字数:300满分:100分
用户的作文(系统评分80.0分
评语:

语句间的衔接成分用得不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;作者句法基础较为扎实;作者词汇基础不错,在高级词汇的积累上还要再接再厉。

用户练习作文:

At the first, I don't agree with this opinion that the dialects are just as acceptable in public place, due to there are a lot of people from different places of our country to work and study in the same big city, such as Beijing, Shanghai, Shenzhen etc. so it is necessary for us to speak in mandarin as the standard language in order that we can better communicate with each other smoothly in public place, especially for teaching language, it is the most important for us to unify the language to teach, but not displaced, after all, the mandarin is the most popular in all provinces of China. Of course, we can speak familiar dialect to our family members, which is very simple and convenience communicate way between each other. In a word, we will use different communicate ways in different places, because we should respect everyone around ourselves so that we can be better mutual understand and trust in daily.

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