句法很棒,若适当增加一些从句的使用,文章会取得更好的成绩;文章词汇表达比较灵活,高级词汇的使用要继续加强;文中使用了简单的连接词和过渡词。
First of all I will do nothing but have a good sleep, because I have not had enough time to sleep for a long time. I am very tired. And then I will hang out with my best friends for several days. All of us studied hard even didn't have time to play together before. After that, I will travel to some places where I want to go with my family. That will be very fun.
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