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My house is a small one with two bedrooms one dinning room a kitchen and a toilet. The main bedroom has two windowns. It is about 15 square meters. I put my bed on the northeastern corner,and a cloth closet along the west wall. There is a desk in front of the south window.the smaller bedroom is my son's. He likes cartoon, so he decorate his room with many cartoon pictures.We put the frigerator in dinning room because the kitch is large enough to put it in. We put the washing machine on the balconey so we can dry our cloth outside easily.