参考词汇:
中秋节 the Mid-Autumn Festival 农历 lunar calendar
赏月 enjoy the full moon 月饼 moon cake文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用高级词汇就更好了;句式变化多样,句法方面做的很棒;过渡词和衔接词不饱和,文章行文较为流畅。
The Mid-Autumn Festival is one of the traditional festivals in China. At the Mid-Autumn Fetival Day families always have a nice dinner and enjoy the full moon together. There is many delicious food and the moon cakes are necessary food in the special dinner. In the Mid-Autumn Festival holiday many people will travel and many people will visit their kin or friends. Many people who work or study in the other cities will go back to their hometown for the reunion. This is the second important festival next to the Spring Festival.