2015年高考作文优秀范文：登山活动

文中从句数量过少；作者能较灵活地使用词汇表达，但高级词汇的积累还有很大的空间；衔接成分很少出现，文章结构欠严谨。

On the 10th of April a sunny day, in Daqing Mountain, a mountain climbing campaign was held by Xing Guang High School. About 200 students and teachers attended in this activity. At 7am the campaign began. All of the students and teachers set off to the top of the mountain. They all enjoyed the mountaineering process and at the same time they walked as soon as possible. The campaign was over successfully at about 11am. This activity made the students and teachers relax from the hard works.