正确句子比例很高,但需多多加强从句的使用;希望作者可以加强词汇表达多样性,尤其是高级词汇的积累;文章上下文衔接自然。
My net friend is Marisol. She comes from America. She is 24 years old now and she is very beautiful. We have been talked with each other for one year. She is very fun, so I like her very much. She like China and Chinese food very much. She plans to China in next Summer Holiday. I am looking forward to seeing her.