七年级英语下册 Unit10 单元 测试卷写作范文：有趣的一天

句法知识很棒，若增加一些从句的使用，文章会更出色；作者词汇量偏少，不过单词拼写方面做的不错；文章层次不够分明，缺少组织，需注意文章整体的组织结构；请注意分段；可以适当增加副词的使用；请提高文章内敛性，段落和句子要围绕主题展开。

Sam got up at six o'clock yesterday morning.Then, he rode his bike to the park,he is very happy playing at the park.He had a lunch with his parents in the McDonald's.At afternoon,he played the basketball with his classmates from four to six.After dinner,sam went for a walk with his father,his father boungt a classical CD for him,he is enjoy about it,because he like the classical music.what a day sam had.