七年级英语下册 Unit10 单元 测试卷写作范文：有趣的一天

作者词汇量偏少，不过单词拼写方面做的不错；复杂句的使用不是很丰富；上下文衔接欠佳，文章层次欠清晰，建议加强连接词和衔接词的积累；请注意分段；可以适当增加副词的使用；请提高文章内敛性，段落和句子要围绕主题展开。

Sam got up at six o'clock yesterday morning.After that, he rode his bike to the park,he extrmely playing at the park.He had lunch with his parents in the McDonald's.At afternoon,he played basketball with his classmates from four to six.He was very happy.After dinner,sam went for a walk with his father,his father brought a classical CD for him,he loved it,because he liked the classical music.what a happy day sam had.