文中从句数量不足;文中词汇表达较丰富恰当,但高级词汇稍显不足;上下文衔接稍显不流畅。
Sam got up at six o'clock yesterday morning, After that , he rode his bike to the park , he had very funny time at there, and had lunch in McDonald's with his parents. afternoon , Sam played basketball with his classmates at school from four PM till six PM . After dinner he went for a walk with his father, his father bought a classical music CD for him. this is happy day he had.