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文章词汇表达要更加熟练，希望能更多使用一些高级词汇；句式变化多样，句法方面做的很棒；结构不严谨，行文不流畅。
Sam got up at six o'clock yesterday morning. After that, he rode his bike to the park and he had great fun playing at there, and had lunch in McDonald's with his parents. In the afternoon, Sam played basketball from four to six with his classmates at school. After dinner he went for a walk with his father, his father bought a classical music CD for him. What a happy day he had.
