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作者能较熟练地使用词汇表达，一些高级词汇的使用也比较灵活；错误句子很少，但从句使用不熟练；上下文衔接欠佳，文章层次欠清晰，建议加强连接词和衔接词的积累。
Sam got up six o'clock yesterday morning. After then he rode his bike went to the park, and he had great fun playing at there. In the afternoon, he had lunch at McDonald's with his parents, and then he played basketball from four to six with his classmates. he had relaxing time. After dinner, Sam went for a walk with his father. His father bought a classical CD for him. He was very happy because he enjoy music very much. What a happy day he had.
