句式多变,多多练习从句的使用;作者词汇量积累很好,高级词汇积累要重视;文中基本没有过渡词和衔接词,建议增加衔接词汇的积累。
tom is a good student. he give himself to makes some rules.it include tom get up at 6:00 every day and go to school at 6:15 second,don't eat outside everyday.third, on school days don't listen to music,then ,on school days don't watch TV,he has to did his homework.he back home by 12:00 in the morning and by 9:20 in the evening he must go home on time.there are tom's rules,do you feel that it help to tom