七年级英语下册 Unit10 单元 测试卷写作范文：有趣的一天

过渡词很丰富，衔接词同时使用的恰到好处；句子错误偏多，建议修改；单词拼写做的不错，文中词汇表达贫乏；请注意分段；请提高文章内敛性，段落和句子要围绕主题展开；连词使用偏少。

Sam yesterday got up six o'clock ,he very funny ,that he bike bicycle go to part ,in the afternoon, he eat lunch with his parents in McDonald's ,and Sam play basketball with he classmate ,in the 4 o'clock till 6 o'clock , after dinner,San with he father go for a walk he father brought a classical music for him ,today Sam is very funny.