初一英语作文模拟题:我的理想

采用了简单的衔接手法，行文流畅；句子错误偏多，建议修改；单词拼写做的很棒，还请注意增加词汇的积累；请注意分段；连词使用偏少。

My dream Do you have dream when you older?some people want become doctor,he think will make much money,some people want to be a writer and make the writing,and me,i want to be a teacher,i like teaching child, i think they'er very cute,every day see them i feel very happy,i will teaching they a lot of,i will tell them:how to study,how to be a person,how to chance yourself life.