初一英语作文模拟题:我的理想

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Do you have dream? when you older you want to be something?someone want to be a doctor,he think this work will make much money,someone want to be a writer and make the writing,every people have yourself dream ,and i do?I want to be a teacher,i like teaching child, i think they'er very cute,every day see them i feel very happy,i will teaching they a lot of,i will tell them:how to study,how to be a person,how to chance yourself life.