初一英语作文模拟题:我的理想

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Do you have dreams?Do you want to be something when you older?some people want to be a doctor,he think this work will make much money,some people want to be a writer and make the writing,Every people have yourself dream,and i do?I want to be a teacher,I like teaching child, i think they'er very cute,every day see them i feel very very happy,I will teaching they a lot of,i will tell them:how to study,how to be a person,how to change yourself life.