文中词汇表达贫乏,但是单词拼写做的不错;熟练的采用了一些从句;不能熟练使用过渡词,基本没有衔接词;请注意分段;连词使用偏少。
Do you have dreams?what's your dream?When you group up,what do you want to do?I believe you have many dreams,are you ready for your dreams?I think some people want to be a doctor,he think this work will make much money,some people want to be a writer and make the writing,Every people have dreams,and i do?I want to be a teacher,I like teaching child, I think they'er very cute,every day see them i feel very very happy,I will teach my student a lot of,i will tell them:how to study,how to be a person,how to change yourself life.