采用了恰当的衔接手法,层次清晰;文中词汇表达较丰富恰当,但高级词汇稍显不足;熟练使用了一些长难句。
our eyes are important parts in our body,how to protect our eyes? first,you should be reduce watch TV and computer times,you should watch computer thirty minutes everyday,second,Don't read book in bed or dark place,read book and write homework you should sat down under enough lights,third,if you study long time you need to have a rest,go walk for to watching green trees.so protect our eyes is an important things.