正确句子比例很高,但需多多加强从句的使用;单词拼写做得很好,请注意积累词汇量;文中基本没有过渡词和衔接词,建议增加衔接词汇的积累。
I have a net friend. His name is Thomas. I don't know his real appearance but he did told me that he is thin and tall before. He is very helpful and understanding. He listens to my problems and help me. I am very happy to have a friend like him.