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初一英语作文模拟题:我的网友

发布时间:2013-05-16 15:01浏览次数:1421
要求:
以“我的网友 My Net Friend ”写一篇作文。
要求句子通顺,语法正确,卷面干净,书写规范。
要求不少于60个单词。
用户的作文(系统评分45.0分
评语:

文章衔接手法恰当;单词拼写做得很好,请注意积累词汇量;增加一些从句的使用,文章会更不错。

用户练习作文:

My friend and I both are from China. My friend is short, handsome, honest and funny. His father is soldier, he is about thirty-eight, his mother is a housewife, she is little heavy. His likes play the piano. I would like play the piano. He doesn’t like study, he likes play. He and I both are good friend, we often play basketball together. I like writing now, but my friend doesn’t like writing. My study is hard-working and I am very kind. I have some books and like to read books. My friend and I both are good friend!

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