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My friend and I both are from China. My friend is short, handsome, honest and funny. His father is soldier, he is about thirty-eight, his mother is a housewife, she is little heavy. His likes play the piano. I would like play the piano. He doesn’t like study, he likes play. He and I both are good friend, we often play basketball together. I like writing now, but my friend doesn’t like writing. My study is hard-working and I am very kind. I have some books and like to read books. My friend and I both are good friend!