初一英语作文模拟题:我的网友

文中词汇使用较丰富恰当，但高级词汇表达还需要很大提升；可适当增加复合句和从句的使用；建议加强过渡词和衔接词的积累，文章结构不严谨。

I was only nine years old when I learnt how to use a computer. My mother is my first teacher. I know how to type, how to copy a file, and how to visit a web site on the Internet. One day, mom was not at home. I turned on the computer and began to learn how to chat on net. The first one I met there was a boy called Tom. He greeted me politely. When he knew that I was only a 9-year-old girl, and almost knew nothing about chatting on net,he started showing me how to use the chatting tools, how to download, and how to send e-mails. I learnt a lot from him.