错误句子很少,但从句使用不熟练;请作者增加词汇表达的丰富度,单词拼写要认真;结构不严谨,行文不流畅。
Sam got up at 6:00 clock yesterday. Then he went to the park by riding bike and he was so happy to play in the park. He eated lunch in the McDonald's with his parents. And Sam played basketball with his classmate in the school at afternoon. After dinner, he went for a walk with his father and his father brought a classic CD for him. How interseted for Sam's day!