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七年级英语下册 Unit10 单元 测试卷写作范文:有趣的一天

发布时间:2013-06-19 16:11浏览次数:17702
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Sam昨天六点钟起床。然后骑自行车去公园,他在公园玩得很开心。中午和父母在麦当劳(McDonald’s)吃午饭。下午Sam和他的同学在学校打篮球,从下午四点一直打到(till)下午六点。晚饭后,Sam和父亲一起散步(go for a walk),父亲给他买了一张古典音乐CD。这一天Sam过得多么有趣啊!
用户的作文(系统评分58.0分
评语:

正确句子比例很高,但需多多加强从句的使用;文中高级词汇使用较少,但单词拼写做的很棒;语言不流畅。

用户练习作文:

Sam is my best friend. Do you want to know what he did yesterday? Let me tell you something about him. He got up early at six o'clock. After breakfast, he rode a bike to the park. He flew a kite in the park. He had a pleasant time. At noon, he had a delicious lunch at McDonald’s with his parents. In the afternoon, he played basketball with his classmates. They played from 4:00 p.m. till 6:00 p.m. After dinner, he went for a walk with his father. His father bought a CD of classical music. How interesting the day Sam had! Do you think so?

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