正确句子比例很高,但需多多加强从句的使用;文中高级词汇使用较少,但单词拼写做的很棒;语言不流畅。
Sam is my best friend. Do you want to know what he did yesterday? Let me tell you something about him. He got up early at six o'clock. After breakfast, he rode a bike to the park. He flew a kite in the park. He had a pleasant time. At noon, he had a delicious lunch at McDonald’s with his parents. In the afternoon, he played basketball with his classmates. They played from 4:00 p.m. till 6:00 p.m. . After dinner, he went for a walk with his father. His father bought a CD of classical music. How interesting the day Sam had! Do you think so?