文章词汇表达要更加熟练,希望能更多使用一些高级词汇;增加一些从句的使用,文章会更不错;可适当增加连接词和衔接词的使用。
my favourite movie is Wuthering Heights.It talks about love and revenge.Love is diamond subject.but if love with revenge together ,however this story will interesting. In this movie main character are very fresh and they are very honest.it brings me wonderful image and beautiful memories.love is romantic So I like the movie