文中从句的数量太少;一些高级词汇的使用也比较灵活,但文中词汇表达丰富度不足;语言不流畅。
Sam waked up at six yesterday morning.then he rode his bicycle to the park. He had great fun playing in the park. At noon,he had lunch with his parent McDoanld’s. In the afternoon ,Sam played baskeball from 4:00 PM to 6:00 PM with his classmates. After dinner,Sam went gor a walk with his father,his father bought a classical CD for him. What a happy day sam had