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Sam got up at 6:00 am yeasterday morning. He went to the park by bike. He was very happy.Sam had lunch with his partents at McDonald's.Sam and his students played basketball from 3:50 pm to 6:00 pm. Sam and his father went for a walk after dinner.His father buied a music CD for him. It'is a interesting day for Sam.