高一英语作文模拟题:关于汽车

如若适当增加一些从句的使用，文章会取得更好的成绩；文中高级词汇使用较少，但单词拼写做的很棒；文中基本没有过渡词和衔接词，建议增加衔接词汇的积累。

How to improve the school safety School safety is a matter of great importance. Great efforts should be made by the school to make sure the campus is safe. Firstly, nobody should be allowed to enter the school without permission. The school guard should check everyone entering the school strictly. Besides, the school security guards should walk around the campus from time to time so that some bad people can be frightened away. More importantly, school safety education should be offered by the school. Students can be taught what to do when faced with danger. As for us students, we should keep safety in mind whatever we do. We shouldn't trust strangers or give away our personal information to them