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2015年高考作文优秀范文:About Examinations

发布时间:2015-09-30 16:27浏览次数:1030[网页划词已开启]
要求:
写一篇以 About Examinations 为题的议论文。要求 200 个词左右。
  提示:
  1. 自从我上学以来不知经历了多少次考试。
  2. 有人认为考试是老师的秘密武器,我却不以为然……
  3. 这是我国的制度问题,……要改革考试。
  4. 建议必要处增加一些细节。
  拟用词语:
  1. magic weapon 秘密武器
  2. reform the entrance system 改革考试制度

用户的作文(系统评分79.5分
评语:

语句间的衔接成分用得不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;作者句法知识扎实,但从句稍微偏少;用词灵活多样,也能较灵活地使用一些高级词汇。

用户练习作文:

  I don't remember how many examinations I've taken since I began my schooling. To tell the truth, I don't like examinations at all. I dare say that, in fact, no student likes examinations.   We often hear people say “Examinations are teachers' magic weapon”, so most of us may think it is our teachers who give us students so many examinations. But I don't think so. Almost all of them have once been students before they became teachers. We don't like examinations, and neither do our teachers, which may be reasonably concluded. What's more, the more examinations we take, the more time will be taken from our teachers and the more trouble our teachers have to take.   It is the system in our country, I think, that gives us students so many examinations. If there were no entrance examinations, and all the students could go up to the higher grades without competition, there would not be so many examinations in primary and middle schools. So it is important and necessary to reform the test system. Only in this way can examinations be greatly reduced, and then all the students will be happier.

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