文章词汇表达要更加熟练,希望能更多使用一些高级词汇;错误句子很少,但从句使用不熟练;结构不严谨,行文不流畅。
San get up at six o'clock. Then he get to park by bicycle and had fun. He had lunch with his parents in McDonald's at noon. San went to school to play basketball with classmates at 4:00pm till at 6:00pm. After dinner ,San went for a walk with his father and got a classical CD from his father bought. How a funny day today!