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作者词汇量积累很好，高级词汇积累要重视；正确句子比例很高，但需多多加强从句的使用；层次不够清晰，文中很少使用衔接词。
Hello,my name is Lucy King. I'm thirteen years old. I come from UK. My mother's language is English. I hope that I can make a friend in China. We can learn from each other. I can help her or him learn English, and he or her helps me improve my Chinese. I wish that we have the same hobbies. I have a lot of hobbies, for exemple sports, music and movies. It is important for me to meet you. Come on, I'm waiting for you.
