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正确句子比例很高，但需多多加强从句的使用；文中词汇使用较丰富，但高级词汇使用太少；全文结构不够严谨，文中很少使用衔接词和过渡词。
Hello,my name is Lucy King. I'm thirteen years old. I come from UK. My mother's language is English. I hope that I can make a friend in China. We can learn each other. I can help her or him learn English, and he or her helps me improve my Chinese. I wish that we have the same hobbies. I have a lot of hobbies, for exemple sprots, music and movies. It is important for me to meet you. I believe that you is very easy to get along with.
