正确句子比例很高,但需多多加强从句的使用;词汇表达不够丰富,要增加高级词汇的使用;语言不流畅。
Sam got up at six o’clock yesterday morning. After that, he rode his bike to the park. He had great fun playing in the park. At noon, he had lunch in McDonald’s with his parents. In the afternoon, Sam played basketball from four to six with his classmates. After dinner, Sam went for a walk with his father. His father bought a classical CD for him. What a happy day Sam had!