七年级英语下册 Unit10 单元 测试卷写作范文：有趣的一天

文中词汇表达贫乏，但是单词拼写做的不错；正确句子比例很高，但需多多加强从句的使用；上下文衔接欠佳，文章层次欠清晰，建议加强连接词和衔接词的积累；可以适当增加副词的使用；请注意分段；请提高文章内敛性，段落和句子要围绕主题展开。

Sam had a busy Saturday.He got up at six o'clock.Then He rode bicycle to the park.He had a good time in the park.For lunch,He ate something tasty in McDonald's with his parents.In the afternoon,he played basketball with his friends.From four o'clock till six o'clock.After dinner,he went for a walk with his father.His father bought a CD for him.He was so happy. What a interesting day!