错误句子很少,但从句使用不熟练;文章能较灵活地使用部分高级词汇,但词汇表达丰富度不足;文中很少出现过渡词和衔接词。
Sam wake up at 6 pm on the last day.Then he drive a bicycle to the park and playing fun.he with his parents eat lunch on McDonali`s at afternoon. In the afternoon,sam with his classmate play baskeball for at 4 pm untill 6pm.Sam and his father go for a walk after the dinner time, his father by a classical music CD to him. This is the funny day!