文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用高级词汇就更好了;错误句子很少,但从句使用不熟练;层次不清晰,几乎没有使用衔接词。
Sam waked up at 6 pm on the last day.Then he has drive a bicycle to the park and playing fun. He with his parents eat lunch on McDonali`s in the afternoon. In the afternoon,Sam with his classmate play basketball for at 4 pm until 6pm.Sam and his father go for a walk after the dinner time, his father by a classical music CD to him. This is the day!