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正确句子比例很高，但需多多加强从句的使用；作者能较灵活地使用词汇表达，但要多积累高级词汇；连接词过少，建议增加衔接词汇的积累。
My name is Lucy King. I’m from the UK, and I can speak English. I want havea pan pal in China. I like China. I’m 13 years old and my birthday is in December. I have a little dog named Coco. I like playing sports and listening to the music. On weekends, I often go to the movies with my parents. Please write and tell me about yourself.
