文中词汇表达贫乏,但是单词拼写做的不错;正确句子比例很高,但需多多加强从句的使用;连接词过少,建议增加衔接词汇的积累。
My name is Lucy King. I’m from the UK, and I can speak English. I want have a pan pal in China. I like China. I’m 13 years old and my birthday is in December. I have a dog. I like playing sports and listening to the music. On weekends, I often go to the movies with my parents. Please write and tell me about yourself.