文章词汇使用较为恰当灵活,希望能更熟练地使用高级词汇错误句子很少,但从句使用不熟练;全文结构不够严谨,文中很少使用衔接词和过渡词。
Sam wake up at six o'clock yesterday, then ride bike to garden, he is happy. He have lunch with his parent at noon in McDonald's. Sam played basket ball with his class mate in the afternoon from 4pm to 6pm. After dinner, Sam and his father go for a walk, his father brought a classical CD for him. Sam was having a interesting day.