拼写很棒,可适当增加高级词汇的使用;错误句子很少,但从句使用不熟练;建议在衔接词汇方面加强积累。
Sam wakes up at six o'clock yesterday, after that riding bike to garden, he was happy. He has lunch with his parent at noon in McDonald's. Sam was played basket ball with his class mate in the afternoon from 4pm to 6pm. After dinner, Sam and his father go for a walk, his father get him a classical CD. Sam was having a interesting day.