文章词汇使用较为恰当灵活,希望能更熟练地使用高级词汇错误句子很少,但从句使用不熟练;建议在衔接词汇方面加强积累。
Sam wakes up six o'clock yesterday, he riding bike to the park, he was happy. He has taken lunch with his parent at noon in McDonald's. Sam was playing basket ball with his class mate in the afternoon from 4pm to 6pm. After dinner, Sam and his father go for a walk, his father get him a classical CD. Sam was having an interesting day.