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Sam wakes up six o'clock yesterday, he riding bike to the park, he was happy. At noon with parents have lunch in McDonald's. From 4pm till 6pm, Sam was playing basket ball with his class mate. After dinner, Sam and his father go for a walk, his father brought him a classical CD. Sam was having a wonderful day!