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Sam wakes up at six o'clock yesterday, after that he riding bike to the park, he was happy. At noon with parents has lunch in McDonald's. From 4pm till 6pm, Sam played basket ball with his class mate. After dinner, Sam and his father go for a walk, his father brought him a classical CD. Sam was having a wonderful day!