错误句子很少,但从句使用不熟练;作者词汇表达较丰富准确,不过高级词汇的积累还有很大的空间;衔接成分很少出现,文章结构欠严谨。
Sam wakes up at six o'clock yesterday, then he riding bike to the park, he was happy. At noon he with parents having lunch in McDonald's. From 4pm till 6pm, Sam was palying basket ball with his classmate. After dinner, Sam and his father go for a walk, his father brought him a classical CD. Sam having a wonderful day!