作者词汇表达较丰富准确,不过高级词汇的积累还有很大的空间;错误句子很少,但从句使用不熟练;衔接词汇很少,建议加强过渡词和连接词的积累。
Sam wakes up at six o'clock yesterday, then he riding bike to the park, he was happy. At noon Sam with parents having lunch at McDonald's. From 4pm till 6pm, Sam was palying basket ball with his classmate. After dinner, Sam and his father go for a walk, his father brought him a classical CD. Sam is having a wonderful day!