错误句子很少,但从句使用不熟练;一些高级词汇的使用也比较灵活,但文中词汇表达丰富度不足;衔接成分很少出现,文章结构欠严谨。
Sam wakes up at six o'clock yesterday, then he riding bike to the park, he was happy. At noon Sam with parents having lunch at McDonald's. From 4pm till 6pm, Sam was palying basket ball with his classmate. After dinner, Sam and his father go for a walk, his father brought him a classical CD. Sam having a wonderful day!