错误句子很少,但从句使用不熟练;一些高级词汇的使用也比较灵活,但文中词汇表达丰富度不足;行文稍显不流畅,应增加文中衔接词的使用。
Sam wakes up at six o'clock yesterday, after that he was riding bike to the park, he was happy. At noon with parents having lunch at McDonald's. Then after, Sam was palying basket ball with his classmate from 4pm till 6pm. After dinner, Sam and his father go for a walk, his father brought him a classical CD. Sam having a wonderful yesterday!