错误句子很少,但从句使用不熟练;作者词汇表达较丰富准确,不过高级词汇的积累还有很大的空间;行文稍显不流畅,应增加文中衔接词的使用。
Sam wakes up at six o'clock yesterday, after that he was ride bike to the park, he was happy. At noon with parents having lunch at McDonald's. Then after, Sam was palying basket ball with his classmate from 4pm till 6pm in the afternoon. After dinner, Sam and father go for a walk, father brought him a classical CD. Sam having a wonderful day!