错误句子很少,但从句使用不熟练;作者词汇量偏小,另外文章有些单词拼写错误;结构不严谨,行文不流畅。
A Interesting Day Ysterday Sam got up at six oˊcolck.After that,he rode a bike to park,in the park Sam was very happy. For lunch,he had at the McDonaldˊs with his pearents.In the afternoon, he played basketball from four oˊcolck till six oˊcolck with his classmate at school.After dinner ,he went for a walk with his father and his father buy a old music CD for him.This day Sam was very happy.