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初一英语作文模拟题:我的理想

发布时间:2013-05-16 14:56浏览次数:2027
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以“我的理想”写一篇作文。
要求句子通顺,语法正确,卷面干净,书写规范。
要求不少于60个单词。
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When I was a kid , I had a dream that I want to to be a pianist .I love music especially since I was a baby. One day I when I was watching TV , there is a man playing the piano .I find the music was so touching that I can hardly move .So I ask my parents if I could have a piano .To my surprise , my parents finally agree to buy a piano for me ,which made me very happy . I will never forget the day that I finally have it . I can't help leaving my eyes from my piano . I decide to work hard on it .I made my mind that I will practise some hours on playing the piano . When I grow up ,I want to be a professional pianist and play the piano for the world . I will let the music go around the world . I'd like to be a pianist ,and that is my dream .

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